Analysis of Sample Proposals

#1 Textbooks
Strengths: The two best things about this proposal were introducing the topic well and providing a clear solution
Weaknesses: Two things that needed improvement in this proposal were providing resources for where they will gather information and justifying their solution with more depth.

#2 Off Campus Purchases
Strengths: The two best things about this proposal were providing a solution and backing it up with justifications thoroughly.
Weaknesses: Two things that needed improvement in this proposal were to have a better hook, and ending off on a more clear and concise note.

#3 Climate Change
Strengths: The two best things about this proposal were that they used history and statistics in their introduction and they had lots of depth in all areas of the proposal.
Weaknesses: Two things that needed improvement in this proposal were that it had too many solutions to the problem and that they wrote too much to the point where it gets boring and confusing.

I would rank these from best to worst: 1, 3, 2.

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