https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3mNjTO0agJ0 The commercial that I chose to use for my speech was one for "Bud Light". The first thing that jumps out after the first time that I watched the commercial was the fact that the authors main way of attracting the audience was with the use of humor. Furthermore, the setting of the commercial, in an office, makes it even more humorous. The purpose of the commercial is to, of course, have people buy bud light. However, the way this commercial tries to accomplish this is by making the audience laugh. Therefore, any time someone goes to buy beer, or even thinks about beer, they think about the commercial and of course associate it with bud light. The audience is so broad in this sort of area because there are so many people in the country who regularly drink beer. There is a sense of community in the office that gives an empathetic approach to the commercial. Many people know what it is like to work in an office like t...
After reading your paper, I thought it overall flowed very well. Its was very easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you clearly stated the question of your topic. Your introduction included good sources and correct citations. One improvement in your introduction should be examining your quotes more. Analyze the quotes more to add in more detail. Your introduction should be about two pages in length.
In your Methods section, under participants, add in how many students in total took the survey. It will make it more clear to the reader, and they will have a better idea of your survey.
I thought that your graphs were visually appealing and easy to read. Good job presenting this data and labeling it well.
Overall, make sure you explain your quotations, and try to be as concise as possible. I think that your paper has the potential to be excellent. Nice job.