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Title: High School Start Times Purpose Statement: Persuade my audience that high schools throughout the nation should start later. Thesis Statement: High schools across the nation should have later start times. INTRODUCTION I. High schools need to start at later times A. Ask questions/survey the class about their experiences with high school times to get them engaged B. Students sleep schedules are affecting their health C. Thesis: High schools across the nation should have later start times. Transition: Let's look at the most outstanding reasons for high schools to start later including: affecting student health, higher brain productivity and attentivness, and school success BODY I. Main Point 1: School starting early affects student health. A. Typical sleep cycles begin around 11 p.m. for teenagers and continue through 8 a.m. This means that an early wake-up call (5 or 6 a.m. to allow many teens to catch buses or commute to early-start schools) not onl...
Speech 2 - What does this assignment want me to do?
This final assignment is asking me to make a speech about a topic of my choice. We are supposed to pick a problem that we feel strongly about for whatever reason and come up with the best solution for it. In the speech, we need to cover many points such as why our solution is the best way to fix the problem. Furthermore, we need to have a visual aid to go along with our presentation, along with references and a reference sheet.
The paper flowed nicely and all the information was easy to understand. The language used in the paper is formal and clear. However, there are some sections in the paper like the discussion section where you could be a little more concise. The paper correctly follows APA style.
ReplyDeleteThe introduction section does a good job of getting the readers attention. The methods section correctly uses headings and subheadings. I would suggest elaborating on the analysis of the figures you included.
There is sufficient data for a good report, and incorporating all five figures really helps with that. The introduction and discussion sections do a good job of indicating the main problem and the findings you made. This is overall a really good paper.