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The paper flowed nicely and all the information was easy to understand. The language used in the paper is formal and clear. However, there are some sections in the paper like the discussion section where you could be a little more concise. The paper correctly follows APA style.
ReplyDeleteThe introduction section does a good job of getting the readers attention. The methods section correctly uses headings and subheadings. I would suggest elaborating on the analysis of the figures you included.
There is sufficient data for a good report, and incorporating all five figures really helps with that. The introduction and discussion sections do a good job of indicating the main problem and the findings you made. This is overall a really good paper.